Monday, March 9, 2009

overturn

I see you
but whats going on?
its grows until you cant even see
and then
stops
Its been much longer than this

unreconizable patterns set this life in motion
I'm the deafening cry
but you cant see me

tranquil abrasions fly past your vision
and the air
is quickly thinned

I don't know about you, but I do miss you.

1 comment:

nick's mannequin said...

So basically this is my favorite.

"and the air
is quickly thinned"

Like as if you, or whoever experiencing this, feels claustrophobic
its amazing

and the last sentence pulls it together PERFECTLY