What do I do now?
Should I even Breathe?
the closing dusk
has left me
simple questions, but afraid to answer
simple desires. but overlaying troubles
this is too much to handle
this is too much to handle
I drown away for all to see
thin chances pray on small hopes
its all being lost while coming undone
Tuesday, October 28, 2008
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"Should I even Breathe?"
I love how you capitalized Breathe, it makes it seem twice as important making it seem like it's a person, I don't know ho to explain it, but since it's capitalized it gives it more importance and identity then just a verb.
:)
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