Tuesday, October 28, 2008

Blue

What do I do now?
Should I even Breathe?
the closing dusk
has left me

simple questions, but afraid to answer
simple desires. but overlaying troubles
this is too much to handle
this is too much to handle
I drown away for all to see

thin chances pray on small hopes
its all being lost while coming undone

1 comment:

nick's mannequin said...

"Should I even Breathe?"

I love how you capitalized Breathe, it makes it seem twice as important making it seem like it's a person, I don't know ho to explain it, but since it's capitalized it gives it more importance and identity then just a verb.

:)